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"When she was born

Her parents were filled with joy

They cradled her like a doll

But no, that didnt last very long

By age 2, they were both gone

To do things otherwise, not caring a thing bout their little girl

A age 5 she vowed to herself, to never let anyone in

To never trust, ever again

She kept up that promise, never once did she let go

Until she met him, and then it all changed

Everything changed in her world."

What do you guys think? This is my first real song.

-MusicMel